une_phrase et moi

[flo_nelja]

Il y a un mois, je demandais un couple sur la communauté une_phrase, en n'étant pas sûre de mes capacités à le finir, mais en me disant qu'au moins, c'est facile à faire sur un carnet, sans ordinateur, pendant les vacances.

Et là, je viens de finir ma sixième série. ^^;

C'est que du Bleach. ^^;;

Et je crois que je vais m'arrêter là, parce que je ne sais pas faire le Ichigo/Rukia (et puis de toute façon nighty_sha l'a pris et a commencé à poster, lalala :-) ), je suis trop spécialisée en fics sérieuses pour prendre Shunsui/Nanao, et malgré les incitations énergiques de ma petite soeur à écrire sur la quatrième division, je ne me sens vraiment pas de taille à faire cinquante phrases sur des crack pairings tels que Hanatarô/Rikichi, Retsu/Isane ou Shuuhei/Isane. (J'aime bien ces couples, hein, mais c'est du crack.)

Et oui, plus tard, j'y retournerai avec d'autres séries... mais pas aujourd'hui !

Je vais donner les liens, ça me fera une compile (et on ne sait jamais, au cas où certains des gens qui passent ici ne seraient pas inscrits sur cette communauté...)

Et puis je vous conseille de comparer les différentes ambiances qu'on peut faire sur un thème, c'est très rigolo. :-)

Et au fait, les avertissements sur les spoilers tomes 20 (qui correspond aux épisodes 60-62) sont très sérieux, si vous ne savez pas, ne lisez pas, s'il vous plait.

Orihime/Tatsuki (PG. Spoilers seulement jusqu'au tome 9) :
( Première partie ) et ( deuxième partie ).

Yoruichi/Soi Fong (PG-13. Spoilers tome 19 sauf la fin du second post où il y a des spoilers tome 20)
( Première partie ) et ( deuxième partie ).

Gin/Kira (R pour relations sexuelles, sado-masochisme et glauquitude, je préviens)
Là, j'ai même fait deux séries de thèmes ! (J'hésitais entre les deux, il faut dire)
( Première partie, thèmes normaux ) (spoilers environ jusqu'aux tomes 15-16)
( Deuxième partie, thèmes normaux ) (GROS SPOILERS TOME 20)
( Première partie, thèmes "religieux" ) (spoilers environ jusqu'aux tomes 15-16)
( Deuxième partie, thèmes "religieux" ) (GROS SPOILERS TOME 20)

Tousen et Shuuhei (PG. Ecrit en tant que relation d'amitié, hein, pas en tant que couple.)
( Première partie ) (spoilers tome 17)
( Deuxième partie ) (GROS SPOILERS TOME 20)

Aizen/Momo (PG. Ne fuyez pas tout de suite, c'est à peine louche. Je l'ai fait pour ne pas passer pour une sectaire hétérophobe, entre autres... et parce que comme ça, ça faisait plus de couples Bleach que de couples HP... bon, et aussi parce que j'ai une faiblesse coupable pour cette relation, avouons-le, il y a des limites à la mauvaise foi...)
( Première partie )
( Deuxième partie ) (GROS SPOILERS TOME 20)

Comments

[flo-nelja.livejournal.com]

Yeah, we should... But even if it's only separate sentences, it is long sentences, and I don't know so well the structure of English...

The good thing is, if I was to translate them, I could post them on 1sentence, and your help would be very, very useful.

Just a few ones, translated, amongst my favourites Orihime/Tatsuki (please, signal any errors ! I really have the feeling it's not grammatical.) :

30. Star

Only when Orihime looks at the stars of Soul Society and realizes they are not the same as in her world, does she realize Tatsuki really can't search for her here.

16. Weakness

I'll never let one of these girls hurt you again, said Tatsuki when they were younger ; I'll never let one of these girls hurt you again, would like to say Orihime, if she wouldn't feel so powerless.

38. Gift

Orihime adores the dragon plushie Tatsuki gave here, and takes it everywhere ; Tatsuki adores the princess doll Orihime gave her, and will never show it to anyone.

42. Clouds

Orihime can spend the whole day searching for shapes in the cloud, and Tatsuki can spend the same day looking at their relection in Orihime's eyes.


Besides, what have you seen/read of Bleach now ?

[kaiousei.livejournal.com]

30: Only when Orihime looks at the stars of Soul Society and realizes they are not the same as in her world, does she realize Tatsuki really can't search for her here.

What you'd want is...

Only when Orihime looks at the stars of Soul Society, recognizing they are not the same as in her world, does she realize Tatsuki really can't search for her here.

That sentence was hard! I had to read it over a hundred times to figure out why it sounded odd, so I fixed it as best I could. I changed the first 'realize' into 'recognize' because of writer-habits of my own. ^_^;;

16: "I'll never let one of these girls hurt you again," said Tatsuki when they were younger ; "I'll never let one of these girls hurt you again," would like to say Orihime, if she wouldn't feel so powerless.

Try this:

"I'll never let one of these girls hurt you again," said Tatsuki when they were younger ; "I'll never let one of these girls hurt you again," Orihime would like to say, if she didn't feel so powerless.

[flo-nelja.livejournal.com]

The last one, if I wasn't so stupid, should have been :

"I'll never let one of these girls hurt you again," said Tatsuki when they were younger ; "I'll never let one of these monsters hurt you again," Orihime would like to say, if she didn't feel so powerless.

I feel ashamed. Really, I shouldn't even try to write. :-(

[kaiousei.livejournal.com]

38: Orihime adores the dragon plushie Tatsuki gave here, and takes it everywhere ; Tatsuki adores the princess doll Orihime gave her, and will never show it to anyone.

This one's perfect! The only problem is the typo on "...Tatsuki gave her..".

42: Orihime can spend the whole day searching for shapes in the cloud, and Tatsuki can spend the same day looking at their relection in Orihime's eyes.

This one's pretty perfect, too, but remember to pluralize cloud "clouds".


I've seen of Bleach what they've shown in the anime, so I guess I'm not nearly as far as you. XD;;

[flo-nelja.livejournal.com]

If you have seen all the currenty released anime episodes, what I have seen doesn't matter, really. The important thing is that we can talk. About what happens in episodes 60-62, you know. There's still risks of incomprehension when talking to people who haven't seen them. Now it's OK. :-)

What are your favourite characters and pairings ?